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Unraveling the Mystery of Mysteries<\/strong>, by Chantelle Aimee Osman<\/p>\n

“A first class mystery is also a first class novel.” ~P.D.James<\/p>\n

There are three main elements to a mystery:<\/p>\n

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  1. Plot<\/strong> – This is more important in a mystery. Know at least the key points before starting: who\/what\/where\/why? Always start 20 pages after where you THINK<\/strong> it should begin!\n
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    1. Make sure you have some subplots – romance, etc. Of course, the crime is most important – and it’s not always murder.<\/li>\n
    2. Introduce the crime within the first 3 chapters. Make it believable – do your research. The methods used need to be rational and scientific, and the method of murder should match the killer.<\/li>\n
    3. Clues should be almost invisible. The best ones point in one way but actually say something different if you look at it the right way. You really only need 1-3 really important clues. It’s more the plot and characters.<\/li>\n
    4. You may have heard that “False clues and red herrings are not fair” – baloney! Life’s not fair. Don’t go too far afield with your clues, though – keep them realistic to your\u00a0world.<\/li>\n
    5. Also -remember that everyone has a secret, so everyone might be guilty.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n
    6. Characters<\/strong> – introduce the protagonist and antagonist early. The reader should have some sort of emotional attachment – either like them or hate them.\n
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      1. Look up the FBI Profile Worksheet and fill it out for your characters – then leave most of that off the page!<\/li>\n
      2. Make sure you actually like your characters!<\/li>\n
      3. Your sleuth should be as unique as possible.<\/li>\n
      4. Backstory should be like bread crumbs – drop a trail instead of dumping everything in the first book.<\/li>\n
      5. Explaining motivation is bad, too – show us action or dialogue.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n
      6. Setting<\/strong> – This is often what draws people to the book. Treat setting as another character – don’t adjust it to just to have a place to set the story. Use things and places readers aren’t likely to see, but be accurate.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

        Also remember: anything that is going to make you jump or jar you out of the story is bad – it’s like bad narration in a movie.<\/p>\n

        \"Writing<\/a><\/p>\n

        5 Traits of a Highly Successful Writer (William Lavender)<\/p>\n

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        1. Confidence in your ability.<\/li>\n
        2. Passion about your work.<\/li>\n
        3. Have a willingness to change.<\/li>\n
        4. Don’t give up when you fail.<\/li>\n
        5. Continue your education.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

          Like, Love and Lust\u00a0\u00a0(Alison Sky Richards):<\/p>\n

          Reasons someone might not\u00a0attempt\u00a0a relationship:<\/p>\n